Had a day off today and so another idea was given an overly quick first draft. This one is partly inspired by the current argument Australia and its politicians are locked in about Asylum Seekers, partly inspired by buddy cop movies and the style of the story was shaped by some of the cool and creepy tribal exhibits at the Metropolitan Museum in New York.
I hope you’ll give it a read and that the dialogue in the second scene won’t stop you from reaching the third! Any thoughts/criticisms/catcalls are appreciated and will no doubt help when/if i get around to doing a second draft. Here goes…